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Old May 16th, 2018, 06:23 PM   #1

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Saladin Biography.


Hello everyone, I've just completed my new biography on the life of Saladin.

I would very much appreciate feedback and if you enjoy the video please pop over and subscribe on YouTube.

Many thanks in advance.

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Old May 16th, 2018, 09:33 PM   #2

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Not bad, props for getting most of the pronunciation of names closer to correct than most English youtubers.

Mentioning the dates of major events a bit more often in the first 12 minutes could help with the flow of the timeline as sometime near the 13-14th minute you do start dropping some dates but then start and stop with the dates for the rest of the time.

Decent use of maps though I'd prefer a bit more maps than the iconography but that might just be subjective.
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